Yes, you read that headline right. Got your attention though, didn't it?
I'm pleased to welcome Jenna Jaxon to my blog today! I hope that you'll leave a comment and let Jenna and I know you were here. Plus, Jenna is sharing an excerpt from Almost Perfect as well. So, without further ado, I'm going to step out of the way and let Jenna have the floor. :)
Size Matters
We all say that size doesn’t matter.
Well, that’s just not true. Size does make a big difference--to a
writer at least. And especially when we are talking about the length
of…their work. Is it really a big deal if you are writing a short
story, novella, or full-length novel? I can’t speak for all, but
for this writer, size does make a big difference.
The first romance I ever wrote ended up
being a super novel--187, 000 words. It was my first and I didn’t
know any better. So I just wrote the story as it unfolded in my
head. Didn’t know my head was that big. LOL But unless you
are self-publishing or are Stephen King, your length, even for a full
novel, needs to have a limit. Novels, depending on sub-genre for
romance, give you up to 110,000 words to create your characters, get
in all your plot points, and have ample room for some sexy love
scenes. So writing a novel gave me almost unlimited freedom. And
for a long time I believed I simply could not write short fiction.
Not enough words, period.
Then came the contest. A local
conference offered a short story contest. Four categories. All not
to exceed 2,500 words. 2,500 words! That’s a chapter to me! And
a short one at that. But I so wanted to enter that contest. So I
came up with an idea, a scene really, and started to write.
It may have been the hardest story I
have written because I kept going over budget with the words--I think
the first draft was a little over 3,000. But it was one of the best
writing experiences I’ve ever had because it taught me to make
every word count. You don’t always need a flowery phrase, or all
those descriptors, or to use ten words where two would suffice. I
whittled away at it one summer down at the beach. The word count
function became my best friend. But I got it down to 2500 words
exactly. And that little story went on to win third place in the
fiction category! I was absolutely thrilled. Not only because of
the award, but because I had proved that I could write short stories
as well as long. It just takes a bit more discipline.
Writing short stories or novellas for
me is now a mindset. I start all my books with the germ of the idea,
figure out what needs to happen in the story and plot it out. If I
know I have a word limit--say 12,000 for a novella--I make sure the
story, as I see it, can fit into that framework. Some stories I know
immediately are going to be novel length; others I see in my mind as
novellas. Not sure how I know, but I usually do.
I have now found that short fiction can
be just as rich and vibrant and rewarding. By crafting the story in
the shorter format, the writer must hone their skills as a wordsmith,
creating characters, setting, and plot with succinct language
choices. There is little fat to be found in short fiction--it’s
all lean muscle and sinew, giving the reader the most satisfying
experience possible but in a shorter form. Writing those lean, mean
shorts are very intense affairs for me. I feel under the gun to
bring the work in with the exact amount of words. It’s both tense
and exhilarating, a very different kind of rush.
I had one such rush while writing
Almost Perfect for Decadent Publishing’s 1Night Stand
series. The maximum word count was 12,000, which may sound like a
lot, but for me was a nightmare. There were so many elements I
wanted to weave into the story--the island, the pirate fantasy, the
constant movie references. And, of course, sex scenes. They come
toward the end of the story and by that time, unfortunately, I was
almost out of words. So I went back to make a cut here, a cut there.
I still couldn’t bring it in under the limit. Finally, I asked my
crit partner, who took a pen to my draft, made room for some nice
long love scenes and brought me right to the wire at 12,000 words.
So, who still thinks size doesn’t
matter? :)
Blurb
for Almost
Perfect:
Pamela Kimball’s birthday present, a 1Night Stand
adventure, promises to jump-start her life, put a new man in her bed,
and help her forget her past. Unfortunately, movie-buff Pam’s
Pirates of
the Caribbean
fantasy takes an alarming wrong turn when she’s abandoned on a not
quite deserted island—with ex-husband Roger Ware.
Forced
by hunger to accept Roger’s offer of dinner, Pam realizes the
geek she married has transformed into one of the most charming,
sexiest men she’s ever met. His newfound confidence—and hot
body—re-kindle old fires. A simple kiss leads Roger to challenge
her to discover how much his lovemaking skills have improved, leaving
Pam torn between self-preservation and burning desire.
With
time running out before they’re rescued, Pam must decide if her
heart can survive the consequences of becoming Roger’s “almost”
perfect 1Night Stand.
Excerpt for Almost
Perfect:
She
inched into the lapping surf, searching for movement. Reflection off
the water made this task harder than expected. Wasn’t the Caribbean
supposed to be teeming with fish? Now that’s something she’d had
a lot of instruction in. Almost every marooned-on-an-island movie had
a scene where the heroine learned to catch fish. Six Days,
Father Goose, Blue Lagoon. All you needed was your
hands and patience. She could do this.
Pam
waded out further then stopped just before the water hit her now dry
shorts. “Not gonna to have a damp crotch all night.” The words
reminded her of exactly what she had hoped for tonight. “But
not from wet shorts!” She headed back to shore to remove and drape
them next to her shirt. The bandeau was a different story. Still
damp, even after several hours, and uncomfortable. Might dry better
if not next to her skin anyway. “Screw it! Live dangerously.”
Standing
as good as naked on the deserted beach, Pam smiled as the warm breeze
caressed her bare body. The sense of being slightly naughty added to
her delight in the sensual feel of the air as it dried her breasts.
Her nipples peaked as the wind cooled them. She strutted down to the
water’s edge to sink her toes in the sand, the salty tang in the
air adding to the perfect moment.
“If
you’re skinny dipping, you forgot to remove one very important
piece of clothing.”
Pam
whirled around. Roger stood on the beach behind her, a green bottle
of Perrier in one hand. His gaze played up and down her naked torso
and his salacious grin widened. “Mind if I join you?”
Bio:
Jenna Jaxon is a multi-published author of
historical and contemporary romance who has been reading and
writing historical romance since she was a teenager. A romantic
herself, Jenna has always loved a dark side to the genre, a
twist, suspense, a surprise. She tries to incorporate all of
these elements into her own writing.
Jenna lives in Virginia with her family and a
small menagerie of pets. When not reading or writing, she
indulges her passion for the theatre, working with local theatres as
a director. She often feels she is directing her characters on
their own private stage.
She has equated her writing to an addiction to
chocolate because once she starts she just can’t stop.
Buy Links:
Decadent Publishing:
http://www.decadentpublishing.com/product_info.php?cPath=75_105&products_id=416&osCsid=68ti48u914jdkbaebhb4bh54j2
Amazon:
Barnes & Noble:
All Romance E-Books:
Author Links:
Twitter: @Jenna_Jaxon
I found this topic to be insightful, Jenna, and I thank you for your take on the matter. I wish you many sales, and I do hope you'll stop by again!
Until next time,
Storm Goddess
I guess I never really thought about it, but Jenna you are totally right. Size does matter. My westerns are always longer than my scifi stories and I don't know why. I just seem to have more to say.
ReplyDeleteThanks for a great post.
Thank you, Cindy. I've noticed that with the exception of that one short story and some flash fiction, my historicals are all full-length and my contemporaries are novella length. I seem to have more to say in the historical vein. Perhaps I enjoy them more. Great observation! And thanks so much for coming by. :)
ReplyDeleteI'd like to take this opportunity to thank Nikki for having me as a guest today! I'm looking forward to seeing if size matters to your readers as well. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful article, Jenna. I took a lot from it. I find that I have a "natural length" for my work. I've written really long stuff (>110,000 words) and really short stuff (flash of <500 words), but I find that about 35,000 words is juuuuust right for me. When it comes to historicals, my thought on their length is that people in history really took a lot more words to say what they had to say. They never had to Tweet, after all. :) And, yes, you got me on the title. You are such a tease.
ReplyDeleteI always aim to "tease", Patricia. LOL You do seem to have hit your stride at 35K, from the works I've read. That seems the perfect length for you. It's so nice for plotting when you know instinctively how much room you have to play with. So glad you came by today! :)
DeleteGreat post. :) Size is something I am always aware of. I wish I could write shorter stories but not too sure I could pull it off. I have to admire authors that can.
ReplyDeleteYou really should try, Melissa. There's a great market for short fiction that's blossomed with the advent of e-publishing. As I said, I never thought I could write shorter than about 90K, but my first published work was only 3K. Thanks for coming by! :)
DeleteGreat post, Jenna. And sadly, size does matter.
ReplyDeleteThe best thing I had ever done for my writing career was by taking a writing course where I learned how to write short stories with a very specific word count. I learned that every word has to count. It really taught me to not only keep my prose tight, but taught me how to weigh whether a scene is really important.
Now that being said, that's great for shorts, but I can still get long winded when it comes to my series, lol.
Thanks for coming by, Brenda! Yes, you are exactly right, one thing a specific, low word count will do is tighten your prose and change your perspective on what is essential to the story and what is not. And yes, keep that series long and detailed. Especially when writing about Kal! LOL
DeleteI wasn't teased at all by the title. As a reader I like to read long novels unless they are boring. Before I started reading eBooks I would make sure the print book was at least 400 pages in length. If I knew the author 350 would be OK. I would sometimes pick a 300 page book. Anything less I would skip.
ReplyDeleteI can see the reason for the limits. In fact more than one. First it is the publisher's rule. Second we live in a short attention span world brought on by such things as Twitter and texting. Third many books do leave a person wanting to know how much longer can I take. The older translation of War and Peace was like that. The newest one is shorter, but still long. It actually makes sense at any length.
Many readers skim and the words are wasted. I am one who likes to read every word. If they weren't important they wouldn't be written.
Like you said Jenna writing to a specific number of words makes you choose wisely.
I loved Hog Wild. The ending was actually perfect. To continue would have to be a sequel.It wouldn't be part of the same fairy tale. Some people would say the story wasn't finished. No problem. I finished in my own mind.
Thank you so much, Ray. I too am a lover of long books (Stephen King so delivers on that!), although I'm reading more short fiction than ever because of time constraints. And I like being able to write in different lengths to appeal to different markets.
DeleteI'm so glad you enjoyed Hog Wild. And yes, that's exactly where that story ended for me--A Happy For Now. I'm playing around with ideas for a sequel, but it's going to be a different story with the same characters. Thanks so much for your comments. :)
Ha! Size does matter, a lot.
ReplyDeleteOh, you mean in books? Yeah, there, too.
I just wrote a novella. It'll be out in the fall. I never thought I could do it, tell a short, but I did. It was fun, but I think I'll stick to 80-100K from now on!
I'm with you, D'Ann. The longer the better. Oh, books, right. Well, yeah, there too. I like to have the freedom to go into lots of detail, dialogue, and plot twists that may have to be sacrificed with shorter lengths. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteI love longer books as well, and I'm drawn to write them, too. I'm not sure I'd be able to write a short story and still fit everything I want into it.
ReplyDeleteI've read some short stories and it seems to be a 50/50 split for me... Some seem like an excerpt out of a longer story, others are just a great, quick read.
Variety is the spice of life with stories as well as anything else. To have the option of reading or writing various length stories is a great boon in today's busy world. As long as the book is well written and has the feeling of completion (doesn't seem like an excerpt, as you said, Stacy), I'm happy with being able to choose. Thanks so much for coming by! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Nikki, for having me here today. I had a blast. Your readers were fantastic!
ReplyDeleteIt was my pleasure, Jenna! I am glad you had a blast. I do have some great followers and reads, it's so wonderful to have such support! And your post was so great! :) Much success to you, and come visit again soon!
Delete